Zhen Smith - Revision history

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‎=Description

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‎Identifying Mannerisms

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‎Crime

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‎Friends

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‎Family

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 == Attributes ==
-====Description===
+===Description===
-'''''From VOIDSTRIKE''''':  "Smith pulled a tattered, yellow rag from his pocket, used it to wipe sweat from his forehead. Everyone belowdecks sweated — some more than others, Smith more than most. His black hair looked like thick, wet paint."
+'''''From VOIDSTRIKE''''':  "The twenty-something Smith pulled a tattered, yellow rag from his pocket, used it to wipe sweat from his forehead. Everyone belowdecks sweated — some more than others, Smith more than most. His black hair looked like thick, wet paint."
 === Personality ===

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 == Attributes ==
 === Personality ===
 Zhen is proud of his upbringing in the Neptune Net Colony (known as "Nepnet" to the locals). Like many people from Nepnet, he was trained heavily on math and engineering from an early age.

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 === Identifying Mannerisms ===
-Zhen often wipes away sweat with a dirty rag he keeps in his left pocket.
+* He often wipes away sweat with a dirty rag he keeps in his left pocket.
 == Fan Based Character ==

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 Zhen is close friends with [[Charlie Hong]], an electrical mate on ''Keeling''.
-=== Crime ===
+=== Reason for Keeling Assignment ===
 === Identifying Mannerisms ===

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	=== Identifying Mannerisms ===		=== Identifying Mannerisms ===
		+	Zhen often wipes away sweat with a dirty rag he keeps in his left pocket.

	== Fan Based Character ==		== Fan Based Character ==

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	=== Friends ===		=== Friends ===
		+	Zhen is close friends with [[Charlie Hong]], an electrical mate on ''Keeling''.

	=== Crime ===		=== Crime ===

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	=== Family ===		=== Family ===
		+	Zhen is the oldest of four boys.
		+	* Father: Wei Smith
		+	* Mother: Mei Carston-Smith
		+	* Brother: Tao Smith
		+	* Brother: Feng Smith
		+	* Brother: Jun Smith

	=== Friends ===		=== Friends ===

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 |algnce  = Planetary Union Fleet
 |branch  = Sailors
 |yos     = 6
 |rank    = rank
-|assign  = Propulsion mate
+|assign  = Aux Division Chief
 |station = [[PUV James Keeling]]
 |battles = Battle of ''Ishlangu''
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 |injury  = n/a
 }}
-'''''Zhen Smith''''' is a character in ''[[The Crypt]]'' series.
+Sergeant '''''Zhen Smith''''' is the Auxiliary Division Chief aboard the [[PUV James Keeling]].
 ==Character Background==
 == Attributes ==